Thursday, August 11, 2016

A Moment in Time

                                               Moment in time

I have been learning to add detail to our writing. This is my Writing about a moment in time my holiday.  I did a good work at add detail. My next step is to make my story more interesting by using interesting words.

1 comment:

Ms M said...

Sounds like you had a fun day...I'm glad you got something to eat at the zoo. It would have liked to hear about your favourite moment of the day.